I've played with what is available, and well seeing as I just played Echo (a very dark visual novel) this was a welcome change of pace. Good art work, and a plot that can go anywhere, I would just love to see more and can't wait to see more.
Quel chef d'oeuvre! Que demander de plus! Juste magnifique comment tout les personnages ont des sprites magnifiques et sont magnifiques en eux même cerise sur le gâteau t'es un francophone (je n'ai jamais vu un Vn furry fait par un francophone avant) l'anglais est ma spécialité parmi toute choses sinon pour le jeu je te souhaite bonne chance pour la suite nous on peut patienter alors surtout prends bien soins de toi en premier.(même si attendre la suite là c'est dur je vais pas te mentir)
coïncidence, l’anglais n’est pas non plus ma langue principale. J’utilise littéralement un traducteur d’écran pour pouvoir le lire en espagnol xD. (placez la même chose mais en français pour pouvoir le lire sans traducteur)
Hey i noticed some of my furry friends play this game. But some of them dont understand english only dutch or a small bit german. Will this game get a dutch translation? Its okey if it doesnt ,ill just have to survive so many furry jokes and OMG's.
I really don't mean to sound rude when I ask this so I am very sorry if it comes across as such but... is this VN still alive and active? I just have to know before I let myself get too invested in it.
Bonsoir Ritch ! :) Je veux juste vous dire que j'aime votre jeu, mais j'ai joue votre vieil version du jeu, cependant je vais jouer le nouvelle version (et pardonez-moi, je n'ai pas les accents sur mon clavier americaine >:( ). Aussi j'ai lu que vous avez un plus facile temps quand vous lisez en francais. Il est tres bon recontrer un francais encore ! Pendant que j'ecris cette, j'ai realise que VOUS etes dans le jeu tout le temps !! :0
Hi, I can't download the game because my computer keeps saying "Your wifi isn't private, and I've set it to Private. It still won't work. I've even tried restarting. What should I do?
Really really good game.. I love the story, unlike any others. Hope when the story grows there's still a lot of options, it gets boring when you don't get to interact and it doesn't feel like you are playing or have any choice in anything that's going on.
You should make a Discord server for the game!! (It would make thing a lot easier)
No problem! I thought about it, that most furry VNs are featuring homosexual relationships. So with a genderless char, you can decide if it's yaoi or not!
yeah, I don't have problem with being yaoi as I can still read as more gender neutral most of time, but when it's NSFW it kind breaks the immersion for me when we get description of things that I don't how it is, like a choice of how to deal with a boner and some other intimate choices that it's not intuitive for females. I end up seeing my character more of a NPC than my mc.
I know right. It annoys me a lot when a VN's story is nice and immersive, then suddenly sex time. There's this one VN that I like very much, and suddenly bam 15 minutes of sex
i am absolutely in love with this game! the characters are super lovable too. killool and ritch are my favorites so far. looking forward to this games development!! c:
You might want to ask a friend to proofread some of your dialogue, most of it is alright, but some of it feels rather forced, or unclear. However, the art style and idea is quite good! I hope you move forward with this project!
"Prepare a meal" is a bit formal, "did you cook something?" or "did you make some grub?" would feel a bit more natural, for example.
"Rodents and Rabbits were in huge misunderstandings with Foxes" is also a bit odd grammatically, "Rodents and Rabbits had big misunderstandings about Foxes" reads a bit better.
But I get the idea of the story pretty well, and the characters are pretty interesting! I hope we get to see more of them!
oh yeah thanks for the advices! As myself and the one that helps me for the grammar aren't native english speakers it's something that can happen sadly
And thanks ^^ next update will, if everything goes well, be tomorrow!
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Mec (ou girl) ton novel il est génial, continue comme ça , lâche rien et j’ai ultra hâte de voir la suite de cette pépite !
Parmi tous ceux dont j’ai joué, celui là fait largement partie de mes préférés déjà pour l’artsyle que pour le plot.
Enfin bref je suis content d’être tomber là dessus par hasard et je te souhaite a toi et ta team de bonnes fêtes voilà voilà.✌
merci! Bonnes fêtes à toi aussi!
I've played with what is available, and well seeing as I just played Echo (a very dark visual novel) this was a welcome change of pace. Good art work, and a plot that can go anywhere, I would just love to see more and can't wait to see more.
thank you ^//^
Yeah Echo is quite hard on the feelings uwu
No, thank you for a making a game that lifted my spirits. And yes Echo has the BIG feels.
I love that sand Star Wars reference
haha thanks
Sooo. Anything yet?
Wonderful game with wonderful writing and characters! Shiro's my favorite, hehe :]
thanks! ^^
Quel chef d'oeuvre! Que demander de plus! Juste magnifique comment tout les personnages ont des sprites magnifiques et sont magnifiques en eux même cerise sur le gâteau t'es un francophone (je n'ai jamais vu un Vn furry fait par un francophone avant) l'anglais est ma spécialité parmi toute choses sinon pour le jeu je te souhaite bonne chance pour la suite nous on peut patienter alors surtout prends bien soins de toi en premier.(même si attendre la suite là c'est dur je vais pas te mentir)
haha merci, ça fait plaisir à voir ^^ si tu veux, il y a un serveur discord
didnt even play yet and ik im gonna love the lizard
<3
this is such a great game it has an very interesting story and im excited for the next update
Thanks! ^^
thank you for replying :)
thank you for playing :3
Who's your favorite?
i hope for a new update soon
I wonder why I can't see the guard and killool when he's embarrassed.
I think 1I didn't load all 2 files, the game hasn't done this part yet, right?
The sprites weren't done at this time. Next update they will
coïncidence, l’anglais n’est pas non plus ma langue principale. J’utilise littéralement un traducteur d’écran pour pouvoir le lire en espagnol xD. (placez la même chose mais en français pour pouvoir le lire sans traducteur)
Tu es francophone?
What a coincidence, English is also not my primary language. I literally use a screen translator to be able to read it in Spanish xd
Oh x3
Wow... i cannot download on chromebook
oh
will the fox be datable
No he's a secondary character
:(
Here the Discord server yes ^^
https://discord.gg/jRNePs3BFR
Im having a bit of an issue...i cant get past naming my character on android...Could i get a little help?
Really? That's weird. Does a message popup? If yes please make a screenshot and show me
A typo in the description...
ennemies? OwO....
So far loved the game! :3
hmhm~
W..when is next update owo
Maybe a eta or when i should look ovo
Un jeu vraiment très sympa, hâte d'avoir la suite!
Merci ^^
Le prochain update sera en français en plus =)
Ah super J'ai hâte! y'a une date de prévue ?
Non malheureusement car je dois tout traduire le jeu qui fait 52 000 mots ^^"
et je rajoute des trucs au passage
You're doing so great! The plot, the characters etc. I love everything about this game, can't wait for updates! ٩😍۶
Thank you! ^^
Hey i noticed some of my furry friends play this game. But some of them dont understand english only dutch or a small bit german. Will this game get a dutch translation? Its okey if it doesnt ,ill just have to survive so many furry jokes and OMG's.
well it's funny you ask, because it may yes!
Great! Im getting pretty annoyed translating for each person. ;w;
haha i know that feeling
I really don't mean to sound rude when I ask this so I am very sorry if it comes across as such but... is this VN still alive and active? I just have to know before I let myself get too invested in it.
It is don't worry! I made up a team to help me create better content for you all.
Thank you for your concern, if you want you can join my discord server for weekly updates!
Thanks for the speedy update, I look forward to trying this VN out
i'm glad my game does interest you, have fun! ^^
Hey Ritch, good work on the game and also.
Why did I get rickrolled by your game?
what do you mean?
Some random text came out of nowhere.
Somethink about ''Imagine dragon''
uh? oô
this was a great vn to experience!! :) well done \o/
thank you!! Just you wait for the next update ^^
Hey Ritch, when are we gonna see Shiros, and Gogos and Kilools Parents? I'm very interested in your visual novel >_<
Day 5 ^^
Gogo's day 5 is already available by the way
Oh Okay 😄
NSFW?
nope. Sorry, wrong game
The game is 100% sfw
Now we need NSFW patch 3:
Pervert
Bonsoir Ritch ! :)
Je veux juste vous dire que j'aime votre jeu, mais j'ai joue votre vieil version du jeu, cependant je vais jouer le nouvelle version (et pardonez-moi, je n'ai pas les accents sur mon clavier americaine >:( ). Aussi j'ai lu que vous avez un plus facile temps quand vous lisez en francais. Il est tres bon recontrer un francais encore ! Pendant que j'ecris cette, j'ai realise que VOUS etes dans le jeu tout le temps !! :0
ah merci ^^
Oui le français est ma langue maternelle donc j'ai plus de facilité à écrire comme ça. Si tu veux parler plus amplement j'ai un serveur discord ^^
Super ! :) J’ai juste le joigné. Mais I’ll eat possible qu’il soit le nuit quand je suis sur ligne. J’habites à Hawaï
hey, i noticed while playing that multiple files were missing,
most notably; all of the guard images, and some of the killool emotions
i have already tried redownloading, but it didnt work.
ah!! Thanks for telling me!
there might also be other files missing, but i havent found any so far.
This is an awesome game I even supported you on patreon I wish you re-open the production of it. you did such a good job. :n:
Daaaw thank you! ^^
will you be coming back to finish the game & re-open the patreon?
Of course I will finish the game, I never said I'll stop!
I don't know if I'll open a new patreon, but it is not in my plans for now
Hi, I can't download the game because my computer keeps saying "Your wifi isn't private, and I've set it to Private. It still won't work. I've even tried restarting. What should I do?
Uh? That's weird oô
Hmmm i don't know, try another browser? Firefox, google chrom, microsoft edge, etc
Sorry but would it be possible for this game to be made for android as well?
next update will yes! ^^
Thank you ^^
Really really good game.. I love the story, unlike any others. Hope when the story grows there's still a lot of options, it gets boring when you don't get to interact and it doesn't feel like you are playing or have any choice in anything that's going on.
You should make a Discord server for the game!! (It would make thing a lot easier)
Yeah I definitely will!
is this yaoi? I'm looking for some f/m furry but can't find any :'(
your char is genderless, so you decide if they're male or female =)
Thank you ! :D
No problem! I thought about it, that most furry VNs are featuring homosexual relationships. So with a genderless char, you can decide if it's yaoi or not!
yeah, I don't have problem with being yaoi as I can still read as more gender neutral most of time, but when it's NSFW it kind breaks the immersion for me when we get description of things that I don't how it is, like a choice of how to deal with a boner and some other intimate choices that it's not intuitive for females. I end up seeing my character more of a NPC than my mc.
I know right. It annoys me a lot when a VN's story is nice and immersive, then suddenly sex time. There's this one VN that I like very much, and suddenly bam 15 minutes of sex
I have a question, is the game in another language, like Spanish?
Sadly no but I'll do a french version and maybe a german version too
i am absolutely in love with this game! the characters are super lovable too. killool and ritch are my favorites so far. looking forward to this games development!! c:
Thank you :D
yo i just checked my email and i saw that there is so many updates xD, ill download it and play it later, promise
Lol thats cool take your time x3
Very creative game!
Thanks!
You might want to ask a friend to proofread some of your dialogue, most of it is alright, but some of it feels rather forced, or unclear. However, the art style and idea is quite good! I hope you move forward with this project!
What do you mean unclear and forced?
"Prepare a meal" is a bit formal, "did you cook something?" or "did you make some grub?" would feel a bit more natural, for example.
"Rodents and Rabbits were in huge misunderstandings with Foxes" is also a bit odd grammatically, "Rodents and Rabbits had big misunderstandings about Foxes" reads a bit better.
But I get the idea of the story pretty well, and the characters are pretty interesting! I hope we get to see more of them!
oh yeah thanks for the advices! As myself and the one that helps me for the grammar aren't native english speakers it's something that can happen sadly
And thanks ^^ next update will, if everything goes well, be tomorrow!