Huge bad news

Hello and nothing to say in any case and I support you and I look forward to seeing the rest of your work (sorry if I am not very good in English)

I thought it was already cancelled? When it lost it's data?

**I am going to give some advice on storytelling & give some advice for things that could be improved… But before I do, I just wanna say..

Do what you need to do, your health is your highest priority & you shouldn’t delay anything to do with it because of that.** (don’t delay your health, both physical & mental I mean… and trust me, & know where you are coming from.. I’m sitting here working on a RPG Maker game & I’m barely working on it due to burnout. x3c)

Anyway, now that I got that out of the way.. Here is my advice & some stuff that could be improved & the ideas that stick. (Bear in mind that I’m not a professional writer or am I going to do anything to make you feel bad. These are just my opinions and my advice based on what I’ve learned. Keep Writing & Keep Improving.)

1. I feel like the protag trusts Ritch a bit too easily.. There needs to be some moment where they learn to trust them. Just like in Far Beyond the World. After-all, if you saw a Anthro standing before you, you would freak out and it would take a bit of time for you to get comfortable near them… This is will help get people more immersed in the world you are building.

(yeah yeah, I know using another VN is a bit rude. But I’m not comparing them or trying to say “haha, this game is better, give up”. I’m using that game as an example, and I really want you to go for whatever you want to achieve in life.)

2. The idea of getting stranded on a island works, it leads to questions, which is good for people to get more invested. Leading to theories & blah blah blah.

3. The second I heard the meme music, I instantly started laughed & the immersion died. My tip is, avoid music as much as you can. use ambient sounds instead unless you can find/commission a song that matches the theme.

**4. I feel like you should keep the character number low to begin with, ‘cause adding a lot can make it so you don’t wanna work. Slowly add up the characters overtime & don’t rush yourself on your projects, if you need a break take one.

Projects take a long time, & sometimes can be stressful, boring cause the spark vanished, etc. But, take breaks. Do something else than work every now & again so you aren’t burning yourself out so fast.** (trust me, i once wrote 14 stories in the span of a week)

**If anybody has any advice, comment it here. & with that I wish you well on your future projects & in life <3 **

(Yes im willing to help if you need it, i dont have anything better to do anyway, + its less work on your shoulders, haha ((Free of charge of course x3c))) ~SpeedySnack

I was looking for visual novels that I already read and I remembered this one I came to see how it went and I saw the news, I hope everything goes well and you find a story that everyone likes good luck and I hope everything goes well for you

Do what you think is best. Would rather you enjoy writing the story versus just cranking out another update. Best wishes

No one should be under so much stress and also work on something that isn't giving them happiness. please take your time,you have all the time in the world so please use it.your not betraying us,I/we prefer you to work things out then struggle on the project without that sparkle and if people don't see it that way then they should be more selfless instead of selfish. Health comes first so please don't put yourself in a lot of pressure.

Eh, it happens.  Sorry to see it end, but there's no point in pushing yourself if the magics gone.   Thanks for notifying us, though.  All the luck rekindling that spark, and even if that doesn't happen then at least we can say what did manage to get completed was fun.

Best wishes.

Sad to see the development as it is now, come to a stop. The VN so far has some great content and extremely cute characters, with the beginnings if incredible depth when it comes to their individual lives. Would be amazing to delve further into the world being built, even if it must take the form of a new story.

I hope you know problems are normal, and even your new story will be faced with new problems eventually.

Burn out happens my dude, as a fellow dev might i suggest trying deving another project, the change of pace is great for re-focusing and helps with larger more primary projects, :D

Anywho, hope you're doing ok and just do whatever you can handle even if that means taking a break or what-have-you, :3

bruh

you do what you gotta do, any true fan would care about your well being rather than your vn cause you're the one making said vn and anything more.

Love it And Hope You take your time And Joy it What You Love To Do