I played this game today and really like it so much , by the way , do you use devianart , twitter or any social media so i can watch your art , i really like Killool , he's my favourite character , i want to see art about him
Hey RitchLombaroo, your game is fun and beautiful, and the characters are fantastic, above all Ritch, even if the colors on the characters are missing.
This looks... Really good! I like the opening, it reminds me of the pokemon mystery dungeon games, but went by a bit too fast in my opinion. Other than that though, I can't wait to see how the story and characters develop! Keep up the great work!
Awesome game so far! I enjoyed it so much, and I'm really looking forward to playing more! Btw, if you ever want to make a Spanish translation, I'd be glad to help (it's just an idea, I think it could give more people the opportunity to enjoy this masterpiece :p). Keep up the good work!
I wish this had a better hook to start the story. Finding someone stranded on a beach is a weird situation to immediately go "I'm gonna sign you up for a school" rather than "I'll bring you to a hospital".
Oh, sure, but the start of the game is a little violent for that. Swallowing large amounts of water is dangerous and makes one feel sick, so I'm worried about the MC's health, yo.
I notice the grammar is noticed already so, I hope you get some help there. I'm not native so, I don't mind much haha. Otherwise, I got a few ideas:
I see a lot of potential with the worlds. The societies run similar, but I think you can get a lot more differences out of it too. Take for example "racism" from human world. "Race" is word used to categorize humans -- within a specie. In a furry world though, there's many species. Since canine vs feline and other topics is brought up, some made-up word like "speciesism" could be used instead. That could bring some interesting conversations like, how humans are the same species but still can't get along or whatever. There's a lot of creativity you can put into the furry world like that, and would be really cool if you thought out some more.
That also reminds me the dialogue is kinda fast. I don't think you need to rush through that kind of parts, and I think that moment is important to get to know your world and stuff. Take your time!
Excited for this project! I found out about this on Casting Call Club and I am gonna audition for all three characters listed. I love furries, if you couldn't tell from my profile picture, hehe
So I'm gonna wait 'till the characters are colored and there's more content in here, this looks like something that I'd enjoy. Just wanna point out that there are several grammar and spelling mistakes in the game (I'm thinking "crual" and "will that really works" rn), the dialogue doesn't really flow quite right and it's also trying to go way too fast. Ayway hope you can shape this into something great
man, to be honest, I loved the demo until the end, the sketches are well drawn, the music was cool, the background images, the beginning of the story was also interesting, the details about the furry world was a good detail, the dialogues , the options of choices I liked too, so for a project it's already great, my congratulations, but of course there are things for improvement like putting more details in the dialogues, don't go so fast in the story, since the MC wakes up on the beach and soon he is at the house of a stranger, the painting of the spriters, but putting that aside I loved the game so far, it has a good potential for the following updates and of course I hope for future updates
thanks for reading and sorry if i made a mistake, i'm brazilian and i'm not very fluent in english hehe ^ ~ ^
I hope you have a good day Sir Ritch and that you are well, with this corona virus out there
bye bye ^ - ^) /
Shame it ended on the first day, it was getting kinda interesting!
the world and the character(s) are developed enough to leave you questioning what else you might not know about the society, especially with that fish section.
a few notes:
I couldn't see the character that well.
Please do add more contrast to the characters sketches when overlapping them with the bg, for example: paint the sketch in with grey, even a sloppy fill is better than no fill at all!
The intro
(This is just a small thing which didn't ruin the experience at all) i didn't honestly enjoy the intro. I can't pin point exactly what it is but it just feels boring, and a bit cahotic too. maybe adding a small sequence of pictures to show what happens and then immediately dropping the player on the beach instead of a black void with text would have made me more invested.
Overall it's a good prototype and i'll be definitely looking forward for updates UvU and next time i'll be sure to keep my hands off of Ritch's stuff ;v;
Thank you for your comment! Don't worry for the characters, they are only sketches, and I will color them! I'm glad you like my story so far, and I will gladly let you know when I will update it ^^
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I played this game today and really like it so much , by the way , do you use devianart , twitter or any social media so i can watch your art , i really like Killool , he's my favourite character , i want to see art about him
I used them a few years ago, but not anymore sorry ^^''
Thanks for telling me know , will this game has another chapter ?
So far its doing good cant wait for the next update.
thx! ^^
This VN sounds intriguing. Will this be on android in the future?
i will try yes ^^
I appreciate you giving it some thought! Thank you for taking the time to respond to my question ^-^
@developer Thank you for this lighthearted, warm, beautifully drawn game. Hope you enjoyed creating it as much as I did playing it
Thx! ^^ I did, and I'm glad you enjoy it so far!
Not to be rude, but actually what is the update 7 days ago,I'm not sure is it a real update or a mistake.
Sorry if I'm silly, hope you have a nice day:)
Well the latest update was a big one. Then I made a small one to fix mistakes
Thanks, bro
Great Game! cant wait for the full game
Thanks! ^^
Excuse me but is there a discord for this vn?
Not yet but I will definitely do one! Just need to know how exactly it works, to own a group
Thanks ^^ I will, of course, color them
take your time, took me 4 weeks to draw Smaug's eye
This is one of the most wonderful artworks I’ve ever seen.
thank you got the tutorial from DragoArt of all places
oh my, it's nice!
thanks
so far with the meat being illegal it sort of reminds me of Beastars
It was the reference yes ^^
still a fun visual novel glad I found this after Repeat
Hehe thanks ^^
hope you are doing well despite covid-19 ^_^
I do thanks, and you?
Shiro is my boyfriend, I can't wait to meet him again!And may I ask when will you update next time:)
Hehe thanks x3
I will make the update hopefully soon!
Excuse me When is the Android version coming?
I've got issues with the program for the android version, I'll try to fix it
Oh ok i will be waiting to play this Game I'm excited
I relate to this comment on a spiritual level, after echo I just want something soft and nice.
Well glad you like my game ^^
It will stay lighthearthed depending on your choices ;)
Repeat is no Mr. Bean either, it has a dark story, it's nice to just sit back and have a few laughs
agreed
still has some funny moments I took Sissel Route, how bout you?
Why stick with one route? Sissel is my go-to, but Owen is amzing in his own rights, though Phillip still needs some fleshing-out.
Thanks! I'm glad you help my story ^^
Hehe not so many persons found out the secret ending
It looks awesome! This game will have more updates?
Of course! I barely started it! ^^
Yay! :3
I love this game. I am looking forward to seeing more of it. Please keep up the good work. I would love to see how things will play out.
Thank you!
This looks... Really good! I like the opening, it reminds me of the pokemon mystery dungeon games, but went by a bit too fast in my opinion. Other than that though, I can't wait to see how the story and characters develop! Keep up the great work!
Hehe it was my reference for the intro! Congratulations~
Particularly the Explorers of Time/Darkness/Sky versions, with the beach awakening.
yup exactly ^^ Explorers of sky is my favorite Pmd game so far
I really enjoy this game, keep it up
also what is the update schedule
When i have time to post an update x3
omg! this game so damn fun for me omg! omg! omg! i really like it
hehe thanks ^^
:3 <3
Awesome game so far! I enjoyed it so much, and I'm really looking forward to playing more! Btw, if you ever want to make a Spanish translation, I'd be glad to help (it's just an idea, I think it could give more people the opportunity to enjoy this masterpiece :p). Keep up the good work!
Oh i'd be glad to, but translating a whole game will take a lot of time.
Thanks for playing my game ^^
Hey, I see that there's a bit of weird wording in here? I would love to help you out with it!
Thanks but I already got 2 persons to help me ^^
Darn, well, do you happen to have discord? You seem like a cool guy :D
I really want to play this! But theres no Android version
I will make one for the next update
Thx! I'm so happy
Yes please
More please
Hahaha thanks!
Does this VN allow you to have a romantic relationship with one of the characters? For example the Dragon (Shiro)?
You can become lover with one character at the time, or just friends, or neutral, or even ennemies
I see. That's good to know. Thanks! :)
thanks for playing my game! :3
I actually really enjoy the premise of this. I hope there will be more updates, it's a surprisingly hecka fun visual novel, :D
Thank you!! :D
good i am loving this, but... monkey whit canser? XD, i think i have an idea for that... but i like this visual novel
an idea?
i mean... i think the "monkey whit cancer" is not gonna give good things for the protagonist... just my thoungs
I wish this had a better hook to start the story. Finding someone stranded on a beach is a weird situation to immediately go "I'm gonna sign you up for a school" rather than "I'll bring you to a hospital".
Well I wanted to make a funny situation, like we see in many stories. Like, normal people wouldn't do that :D
Oh, sure, but the start of the game is a little violent for that. Swallowing large amounts of water is dangerous and makes one feel sick, so I'm worried about the MC's health, yo.
I like how this is going!
I notice the grammar is noticed already so, I hope you get some help there. I'm not native so, I don't mind much haha. Otherwise, I got a few ideas:
I see a lot of potential with the worlds. The societies run similar, but I think you can get a lot more differences out of it too. Take for example "racism" from human world. "Race" is word used to categorize humans -- within a specie. In a furry world though, there's many species. Since canine vs feline and other topics is brought up, some made-up word like "speciesism" could be used instead. That could bring some interesting conversations like, how humans are the same species but still can't get along or whatever. There's a lot of creativity you can put into the furry world like that, and would be really cool if you thought out some more.
That also reminds me the dialogue is kinda fast. I don't think you need to rush through that kind of parts, and I think that moment is important to get to know your world and stuff. Take your time!
I really enjoyed your art! Keep it up! :)
Thanks! Yes someone is helping me for the grammar mistakes hehe ^^
It's a good idea, I already used some made up words like "rising a paw (instead of hand)" or "having a mawfull"
And don't worry, the rest of the game won't be so fast ^^
Will there be a Android version?
i will try to ^^
Did an update right now! (Though no android version yet, will look for a tutorial for it)
Cant wait until the next update!!!
Yeah sorry takes me way longer than I thought! But I hope you'll like day 2 ^^
Did an update right now!
I like it. And I’d love to see updates!
Thanks! One will come soon ^^
Did an update right now!
Like it
Thanks ^^
Did an update right now!
Excited for this project! I found out about this on Casting Call Club and I am gonna audition for all three characters listed. I love furries, if you couldn't tell from my profile picture, hehe
nice! Looking forward for your audition! ^^
Did an update right now!
So I'm gonna wait 'till the characters are colored and there's more content in here, this looks like something that I'd enjoy. Just wanna point out that there are several grammar and spelling mistakes in the game (I'm thinking "crual" and "will that really works" rn), the dialogue doesn't really flow quite right and it's also trying to go way too fast. Ayway hope you can shape this into something great
I'm asking help for the grammar mistakes :3
Did an update right now!
Thank you! Don't worry, the rest of the game won't be as fast paced haha.
Did an update right now!
I will try yes!
Did an update right now! (I will look for tutorials on how to make an android version!)
haha thanks for your comment! Yes don't worry, the rest of the story will go smoother haha.
And thanks, I personnaly think it's boring when characters only have one pose, with only the face that change! So I go one step further~
Did an update right now!
Shame it ended on the first day, it was getting kinda interesting!
the world and the character(s) are developed enough to leave you questioning what else you might not know about the society, especially with that fish section.
a few notes:
I couldn't see the character that well.
Please do add more contrast to the characters sketches when overlapping them with the bg, for example: paint the sketch in with grey, even a sloppy fill is better than no fill at all!
The intro
(This is just a small thing which didn't ruin the experience at all) i didn't honestly enjoy the intro. I can't pin point exactly what it is but it just feels boring, and a bit cahotic too. maybe adding a small sequence of pictures to show what happens and then immediately dropping the player on the beach instead of a black void with text would have made me more invested.
Overall it's a good prototype and i'll be definitely looking forward for updates UvU and next time i'll be sure to keep my hands off of Ritch's stuff ;v;
Thank you for your comment! Don't worry for the characters, they are only sketches, and I will color them! I'm glad you like my story so far, and I will gladly let you know when I will update it ^^
I take note of your concern for the intro ^^
Uh?
What does it mean?
Did an update right now! (We see the chars waaayyy better now lol)