Enter Furry World

I like how this is going! 

I notice the grammar is noticed already so, I hope you get some help there. I'm not native so, I don't mind much haha. Otherwise, I got a few ideas:

I see a lot of potential with the worlds. The societies run similar, but I think you can get a lot more differences out of it too. Take for example "racism" from human world. "Race" is word used to categorize humans -- within a specie. In a furry world though, there's many species. Since canine vs feline and other topics is brought up, some made-up word like "speciesism" could be used instead. That could bring some interesting conversations like, how humans are the same species but still can't get along or whatever. There's a lot of creativity you can put into the furry world like that, and would be really cool if you thought out some more.

That also reminds me the dialogue is kinda fast. I don't think you need to rush through that kind of parts, and I think that moment is important to get to know your world and stuff. Take your time!

I really enjoyed your art! Keep it up! :)

Will there be a Android version?

Cant wait until the next update!!!

I like it. And I’d love to see updates!

Like it

Excited for this project! I found out about this on Casting Call Club and I am gonna audition for all three characters listed. I love furries, if you couldn't tell from my profile picture, hehe

So I'm gonna wait 'till the characters are colored and there's more content in here, this looks like something that I'd enjoy. Just wanna point out that there are several grammar and spelling mistakes in the game (I'm thinking "crual" and "will that really works" rn), the dialogue doesn't really flow quite right and it's also trying to go way too fast. Ayway hope you can shape this into something great

man, to be honest, I loved the demo until the end, the sketches are well drawn, the music was cool, the background images, the beginning of the story was also interesting, the details about the furry world was a good detail, the dialogues , the options of choices I liked too, so for a project it's already great, my congratulations, but of course there are things for improvement like putting more details in the dialogues, don't go so fast in the story, since the MC wakes up on the beach and soon he is at the house of a stranger, the painting of the spriters, but putting that aside I loved the game so far, it has a good potential for the following updates and of course I hope for future updates
thanks for reading and sorry if i made a mistake, i'm brazilian and i'm not very fluent in english hehe ^ ~ ^
I hope you have a good day Sir Ritch and that you are well, with this corona virus out there
bye bye ^ - ^) /

Shame it ended on the first day, it was getting kinda interesting!

the world and the character(s) are developed enough to leave you questioning what else you might not know about the society, especially with that fish section.

a few notes: 

I couldn't see the character that well. 

Please do add more contrast to the characters sketches when overlapping them with the bg, for example: paint the sketch in with grey, even a sloppy fill is better than no fill at all!

The intro

(This is just a small thing which didn't ruin the experience at all) i didn't honestly enjoy the intro. I can't pin point exactly what it is but it just feels  boring, and a bit cahotic too. maybe adding a small sequence of pictures to show what happens and then immediately dropping the player on the beach instead of a black void with text would have made me more invested.

Overall it's a good prototype and i'll be definitely looking forward for updates UvU and next time i'll be sure to keep my hands off of Ritch's stuff ;v;