Okay my timing couldn't have been worse downloaded this at 10ish 6 hours later I got back online after finishing my first run(on like 3 games including this one) and found out there was an update 2 hours after my download but either way I certainly am loving it so far
Spelling and grammar errors in the first 5 minutes of the game. Look for these texts:
"Ritch takes care of me, I should ao least be frank." ao --> at
"I... Followed you." --> I... followed you.
Is there a more convenient way for you to report these errors?
Edit: Actually, upon playing more of the game there's a lot of grammar problems. I would recommend a way to easily report these errors to you besides in a comment.
The storyline is greattt can't wait for the next update, and heyy, if you need for some programming helps i can help yaa, like ready for android build or some improve coding ha ha , i am programmer btw.
And also the game file is unusually large for short story . I notice there is some file that is large and maybe not necessary for the game. I encourage you to remove it's for now it's take time to download with my mobile internet speed.
Would you ever plan on making a Discord server? Specifically for reporting bugs and writing errors. Asking because I usually help up-and-coming games with that sort of thing.
nice work though ... there is some inconsistencies with the story like how he is upset for me follow him one day and then like completely forgets about it the next day but eh that is understandable to some degree.
i just figured there might be some problems with me sitting with a person i was just previously spying on XD .
"here" would refer to the beach but from what i gathered from the earlier in the conversation you actually mean to refer to his house so it would be "there".
after two finishes I can say that I haven't played a better novel yet. the characters are original and very interesting in terms of personality and their story, the style in which they are drawn make their feelings stronger (and make them cutest). the world is briefly explained so that I can focus on the plot. I also like the dialog options for which I really feel that they can change something.
The only problem is that I found the game by accident. maybe show it on more places will help find it more easily. (=
I would like to appeal to the creator not to hurry with the development, I would love to wait. (=(=(=
I like that every character has its own unique personality, I really enjoyed it! I absolutely love the art style, its adorable and clean, it just needs coloring. Can't wait for new updates!Keep it up! ^w^
I quite enjoyed what you have so far, I followed you on twitter and shared about this game so more people can know about it, You have done an awesome job so far, I look forward to seeing more from you. Have a great day (or night) and stay awesome.
Omg Ritch is so cute!!! 😊 I hope you keep updating this VN and also Ritch route uwu. It's also playable on Android using JoiPlay app, for those asking for Android version 😉
I'm getting the vibe off Shiro of a tough outer shell but soft inside, reminds me of a character called Sissel from the VN Repeat, what I love about these novels is appearances can be deceiving, hope to see more from you, I seen many projects canceled and I am really interested in this one
I'm absolutely in love with this visual novel! The story is really fun and interesting and I love the characters a lot! Ritch is my absolute favorite hehe he is so nice and cute and caring ❤️ I enjoyed every second I spent playing it! amazing job!
Really? As soon as I saw Gogo when I followed Ritch the first thing I thought was "ok this dog is super cute, people are gonna love him" hahaha. Ritch is still my favorite though. That part in which you have to pick between hug him, pet him or do nothing? I immediately picked the hug and I absolutely adore the outcome ❤️
A good start..., but the game seems way too fast paced, skipping some logical steps, jumping around a little. The already varied expressions are simply cuteness to die for! Even though you may have self insertion to this, I can only assuming you are portraying your real life personality. I feel like there should be more detail on what already exists, and least for the start no day skipping. As is, the immersion is broken when everything is glazed over. It might be rough right now being the only one working on this, but I am always willing to offer thoughts and opinions on things, this certainly has a lot of protentional.
Also, no idea what your plans are for later in the game, but a personal taste is that I don't exactly enjoy having to be human! XD
Thanks for your opinion! The beginning of the game is fast paced to describe quickly the world you are sent too, and to go directly at the interactions and story ^^
I knew this question would come up eventually, and I have to say that I for one am glad it’s sfw. There a so many nsfw gay visual novels out there that it’s really refreshing to see vn that is all about fuzzy friendship and bromance. But that’s just my opinion man
I know right! I played a few ones and got the "surprise" to see it was nsfw. I mean, I,m here for the story, not for some yiff. If I want nsfw content, I go on site for that
I played this game today and really like it so much , by the way , do you use devianart , twitter or any social media so i can watch your art , i really like Killool , he's my favourite character , i want to see art about him
Hey RitchLombaroo, your game is fun and beautiful, and the characters are fantastic, above all Ritch, even if the colors on the characters are missing.
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the cousins character didnt load
Ah! Thanks for telling me!
no problem have a good day
Okay my timing couldn't have been worse downloaded this at 10ish 6 hours later I got back online after finishing my first run(on like 3 games including this one) and found out there was an update 2 hours after my download but either way I certainly am loving it so far
Haha oh no! But don't worry I didn't add much story to the update, mostly fixed bugs
And thanks ^^
Spelling and grammar errors in the first 5 minutes of the game. Look for these texts:
"Ritch takes care of me, I should ao least be frank." ao --> at
"I... Followed you." --> I... followed you.
Is there a more convenient way for you to report these errors?
Edit: Actually, upon playing more of the game there's a lot of grammar problems. I would recommend a way to easily report these errors to you besides in a comment.
Ah! Thanks for the reports. These were errors that got through my supervision.
I'll try to figure out a way to easy the process 🤔
Thank you for your excellent work!
Greetings from Russia!
Thanks! Greetings from Canada, another cold country ^^
I got an error after Misuke said: "What do we have here?
"
ah thanks! I'll fix it. In the meantime you can press ignore
I got this error during Killool and Shiro moment at the beach.
Someone already told me but I just cannot find what the error is :S
Are you playing on Linux?
PC version on my android phone with the Joiplay app.
Just Monika, Just Monika
Damn DDLC Reference
I like it. But when I play it on ren'py it was so glitchy when the character shifts emotions and when I press the menu button.
What do you mean glitchy?
I am on android and I use the Joiplay app to play the PC version and when the characters change expressions and poses the screen blacks out for a bit.
Weird
its going so well im enjoying it so far
thank you! ^^
This will be one of the games I'd look forward to playing! Already attached to Killol and Shiro! Alongside Gogo too(he reminds me of myself tbh).
Ritch is basically a friend I can spend time with, but not romantically. But I do like him!
I'm glad you enjoyed them! ^^
The storyline is greattt can't wait for the next update, and heyy, if you need for some programming helps i can help yaa, like ready for android build or some improve coding ha ha , i am programmer btw.
And also the game file is unusually large for short story . I notice there is some file that is large and maybe not necessary for the game. I encourage you to remove it's for now it's take time to download with my mobile internet speed.
Either way, can't wait for the next update
Thanks for the advice! I'll look what can make it this heavy. Hmm a little help could be nice!
Would you ever plan on making a Discord server? Specifically for reporting bugs and writing errors. Asking because I usually help up-and-coming games with that sort of thing.
nice work though ... there is some inconsistencies with the story like how he is upset for me follow him one day and then like completely forgets about it the next day but eh that is understandable to some degree.
i just figured there might be some problems with me sitting with a person i was just previously spying on XD .
Well he might do as if nothing happened too =P
on shiro's route .
"Alright, will be here around 9 then."
"here" would refer to the beach but from what i gathered from the earlier in the conversation you actually mean to refer to his house so it would be "there".
Thanks for the advise!
its good me love it *caveman noises*
x3
after two finishes I can say that I haven't played a better novel yet. the characters are original and very interesting in terms of personality and their story, the style in which they are drawn make their feelings stronger (and make them cutest). the world is briefly explained so that I can focus on the plot. I also like the dialog options for which I really feel that they can change something.
The only problem is that I found the game by accident. maybe show it on more places will help find it more easily. (=
I would like to appeal to the creator not to hurry with the development, I would love to wait. (=(=(=
Daaaw thank you so much! ^//^
any ideas on how I could show off my game more?
simply wherever it can be shown (=
such as furaffinity.net, deviant art and other networks
and there giving screanshots of the game so people can know what is it and how beautiful it looks.
the reason why the game fascinated me was the style of the characters, so I would use it as a banner.
I hope,I helped you at least little. (=
if you want to ask on something else, I will be happy to answer. (=
I like that every character has its own unique personality, I really enjoyed it! I absolutely love the art style, its adorable and clean, it just needs coloring. Can't wait for new updates!Keep it up! ^w^
thanks ^^
I quite enjoyed what you have so far, I followed you on twitter and shared about this game so more people can know about it, You have done an awesome job so far, I look forward to seeing more from you. Have a great day (or night) and stay awesome.
Aww thanks! ^^ glad you enjoyed it!
Of course, and if there is ever anything else I can do to help, just let me know and I will do what I can.
Well if you wanna chat a bit, you can contact me on Twitter ^^
Alright, also, sorry for the extremely late reply.
@ritchlombaroo
I'm looking forward to update 1.2!!!
Omg Ritch is so cute!!! 😊 I hope you keep updating this VN and also Ritch route uwu. It's also playable on Android using JoiPlay app, for those asking for Android version 😉
Oh really? Thanks for the advise!
And glad that you like him hehe ^^
I'm trying hard I promise :(
can always play on pc
yup!
lol my name in this game but i'm a wolf :P but yea mostly white :P wait i can date dragon me O:
Shiro is dating Shiro!
I'm getting the vibe off Shiro of a tough outer shell but soft inside, reminds me of a character called Sissel from the VN Repeat, what I love about these novels is appearances can be deceiving, hope to see more from you, I seen many projects canceled and I am really interested in this one
Thanks for your interest! ^^
I may try Repeat. Don't worry I'm not abandonning my game, but many things happened
I know, alot has happened, most due to Covid, chaos happened
Posted an update btw!
Thanks! ^^
I'm absolutely in love with this visual novel! The story is really fun and interesting and I love the characters a lot! Ritch is my absolute favorite hehe he is so nice and cute and caring ❤️ I enjoyed every second I spent playing it! amazing job!
Will you add color to the sprites?
And will Gogo be dateable too?
hehe thanks! Did you tryed all the routes?
I'm glad you enjoy Ritch so much~
I will color them all yes ^^
yeah! I tried all the routes and I also tried most option and ended up finding Gogo's route :3 he is super cute ^^
thanks :3
I'm surprised at how much the geeky doggo is popular hehe
Really? As soon as I saw Gogo when I followed Ritch the first thing I thought was "ok this dog is super cute, people are gonna love him" hahaha. Ritch is still my favorite though. That part in which you have to pick between hug him, pet him or do nothing? I immediately picked the hug and I absolutely adore the outcome ❤️
hehe some people thought the hug would lead to a bad reaction, and picked the pet instead ^^
I like the fact my choices are bringing reflexions like this~
A good start..., but the game seems way too fast paced, skipping some logical steps, jumping around a little. The already varied expressions are simply cuteness to die for! Even though you may have self insertion to this, I can only assuming you are portraying your real life personality. I feel like there should be more detail on what already exists, and least for the start no day skipping. As is, the immersion is broken when everything is glazed over. It might be rough right now being the only one working on this, but I am always willing to offer thoughts and opinions on things, this certainly has a lot of protentional.
Also, no idea what your plans are for later in the game, but a personal taste is that I don't exactly enjoy having to be human! XD
Thanks for your opinion! The beginning of the game is fast paced to describe quickly the world you are sent too, and to go directly at the interactions and story ^^
Still, easy there Tiger, er Roo! XD
i'm from brazil,sorry for my english - this game was very good, congratulations! waiting for the update
Thanks ^^
yo i reallylike this but,,,
1: a furr-less monjey xD?
2: i'm glad this is sfw, but i'm especting some romace xD (not nsfw, like a relationship :v)
1) Hehe sorry not sorry~
2) You'll see :)
1) wut?
2) i want to xD
Is this nsfw?
It's 100% sfw ^^
I knew this question would come up eventually, and I have to say that I for one am glad it’s sfw. There a so many nsfw gay visual novels out there that it’s really refreshing to see vn that is all about fuzzy friendship and bromance. But that’s just my opinion man
I know right! I played a few ones and got the "surprise" to see it was nsfw. I mean, I,m here for the story, not for some yiff. If I want nsfw content, I go on site for that
Hello, when this game will have another update? I'm still waiting :)
Hi! Thank you for your interest, I am trying some things I hope people will like, and when I will be happy with the result I'll post a new update!
Thanks, i will be waiting :D
Love the game, all the characters have such fitting and understandable stories and personalities. Can't wait.
thanks! ^^
how long do i need to wait for the update
I played this game today and really like it so much , by the way , do you use devianart , twitter or any social media so i can watch your art , i really like Killool , he's my favourite character , i want to see art about him
I used them a few years ago, but not anymore sorry ^^''
Thanks for telling me know , will this game has another chapter ?
So far its doing good cant wait for the next update.
thx! ^^
This VN sounds intriguing. Will this be on android in the future?
i will try yes ^^
I appreciate you giving it some thought! Thank you for taking the time to respond to my question ^-^
@developer Thank you for this lighthearted, warm, beautifully drawn game. Hope you enjoyed creating it as much as I did playing it
Thx! ^^ I did, and I'm glad you enjoy it so far!
Not to be rude, but actually what is the update 7 days ago,I'm not sure is it a real update or a mistake.
Sorry if I'm silly, hope you have a nice day:)
Well the latest update was a big one. Then I made a small one to fix mistakes
Thanks, bro
Great Game! cant wait for the full game
Thanks! ^^
Excuse me but is there a discord for this vn?
Not yet but I will definitely do one! Just need to know how exactly it works, to own a group
Thanks ^^ I will, of course, color them
take your time, took me 4 weeks to draw Smaug's eye
This is one of the most wonderful artworks I’ve ever seen.
thank you got the tutorial from DragoArt of all places
oh my, it's nice!
thanks
so far with the meat being illegal it sort of reminds me of Beastars
It was the reference yes ^^
still a fun visual novel glad I found this after Repeat
Hehe thanks ^^
hope you are doing well despite covid-19 ^_^
I do thanks, and you?