Hey i noticed some of my furry friends play this game. But some of them dont understand english only dutch or a small bit german. Will this game get a dutch translation? Its okey if it doesnt ,ill just have to survive so many furry jokes and OMG's.
I really don't mean to sound rude when I ask this so I am very sorry if it comes across as such but... is this VN still alive and active? I just have to know before I let myself get too invested in it.
Bonsoir Ritch ! :) Je veux juste vous dire que j'aime votre jeu, mais j'ai joue votre vieil version du jeu, cependant je vais jouer le nouvelle version (et pardonez-moi, je n'ai pas les accents sur mon clavier americaine >:( ). Aussi j'ai lu que vous avez un plus facile temps quand vous lisez en francais. Il est tres bon recontrer un francais encore ! Pendant que j'ecris cette, j'ai realise que VOUS etes dans le jeu tout le temps !! :0
Hi, I can't download the game because my computer keeps saying "Your wifi isn't private, and I've set it to Private. It still won't work. I've even tried restarting. What should I do?
Really really good game.. I love the story, unlike any others. Hope when the story grows there's still a lot of options, it gets boring when you don't get to interact and it doesn't feel like you are playing or have any choice in anything that's going on.
You should make a Discord server for the game!! (It would make thing a lot easier)
No problem! I thought about it, that most furry VNs are featuring homosexual relationships. So with a genderless char, you can decide if it's yaoi or not!
yeah, I don't have problem with being yaoi as I can still read as more gender neutral most of time, but when it's NSFW it kind breaks the immersion for me when we get description of things that I don't how it is, like a choice of how to deal with a boner and some other intimate choices that it's not intuitive for females. I end up seeing my character more of a NPC than my mc.
I know right. It annoys me a lot when a VN's story is nice and immersive, then suddenly sex time. There's this one VN that I like very much, and suddenly bam 15 minutes of sex
i am absolutely in love with this game! the characters are super lovable too. killool and ritch are my favorites so far. looking forward to this games development!! c:
You might want to ask a friend to proofread some of your dialogue, most of it is alright, but some of it feels rather forced, or unclear. However, the art style and idea is quite good! I hope you move forward with this project!
"Prepare a meal" is a bit formal, "did you cook something?" or "did you make some grub?" would feel a bit more natural, for example.
"Rodents and Rabbits were in huge misunderstandings with Foxes" is also a bit odd grammatically, "Rodents and Rabbits had big misunderstandings about Foxes" reads a bit better.
But I get the idea of the story pretty well, and the characters are pretty interesting! I hope we get to see more of them!
oh yeah thanks for the advices! As myself and the one that helps me for the grammar aren't native english speakers it's something that can happen sadly
And thanks ^^ next update will, if everything goes well, be tomorrow!
Okay my timing couldn't have been worse downloaded this at 10ish 6 hours later I got back online after finishing my first run(on like 3 games including this one) and found out there was an update 2 hours after my download but either way I certainly am loving it so far
Spelling and grammar errors in the first 5 minutes of the game. Look for these texts:
"Ritch takes care of me, I should ao least be frank." ao --> at
"I... Followed you." --> I... followed you.
Is there a more convenient way for you to report these errors?
Edit: Actually, upon playing more of the game there's a lot of grammar problems. I would recommend a way to easily report these errors to you besides in a comment.
The storyline is greattt can't wait for the next update, and heyy, if you need for some programming helps i can help yaa, like ready for android build or some improve coding ha ha , i am programmer btw.
And also the game file is unusually large for short story . I notice there is some file that is large and maybe not necessary for the game. I encourage you to remove it's for now it's take time to download with my mobile internet speed.
Would you ever plan on making a Discord server? Specifically for reporting bugs and writing errors. Asking because I usually help up-and-coming games with that sort of thing.
nice work though ... there is some inconsistencies with the story like how he is upset for me follow him one day and then like completely forgets about it the next day but eh that is understandable to some degree.
i just figured there might be some problems with me sitting with a person i was just previously spying on XD .
"here" would refer to the beach but from what i gathered from the earlier in the conversation you actually mean to refer to his house so it would be "there".
after two finishes I can say that I haven't played a better novel yet. the characters are original and very interesting in terms of personality and their story, the style in which they are drawn make their feelings stronger (and make them cutest). the world is briefly explained so that I can focus on the plot. I also like the dialog options for which I really feel that they can change something.
The only problem is that I found the game by accident. maybe show it on more places will help find it more easily. (=
I would like to appeal to the creator not to hurry with the development, I would love to wait. (=(=(=
I like that every character has its own unique personality, I really enjoyed it! I absolutely love the art style, its adorable and clean, it just needs coloring. Can't wait for new updates!Keep it up! ^w^
I quite enjoyed what you have so far, I followed you on twitter and shared about this game so more people can know about it, You have done an awesome job so far, I look forward to seeing more from you. Have a great day (or night) and stay awesome.
Omg Ritch is so cute!!! 😊 I hope you keep updating this VN and also Ritch route uwu. It's also playable on Android using JoiPlay app, for those asking for Android version 😉
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You're doing so great! The plot, the characters etc. I love everything about this game, can't wait for updates! ٩😍۶
Thank you! ^^
Hey i noticed some of my furry friends play this game. But some of them dont understand english only dutch or a small bit german. Will this game get a dutch translation? Its okey if it doesnt ,ill just have to survive so many furry jokes and OMG's.
well it's funny you ask, because it may yes!
Great! Im getting pretty annoyed translating for each person. ;w;
haha i know that feeling
I really don't mean to sound rude when I ask this so I am very sorry if it comes across as such but... is this VN still alive and active? I just have to know before I let myself get too invested in it.
It is don't worry! I made up a team to help me create better content for you all.
Thank you for your concern, if you want you can join my discord server for weekly updates!
Thanks for the speedy update, I look forward to trying this VN out
i'm glad my game does interest you, have fun! ^^
Hey Ritch, good work on the game and also.
Why did I get rickrolled by your game?
what do you mean?
Some random text came out of nowhere.
Somethink about ''Imagine dragon''
uh? oô
this was a great vn to experience!! :) well done \o/
thank you!! Just you wait for the next update ^^
Hey Ritch, when are we gonna see Shiros, and Gogos and Kilools Parents? I'm very interested in your visual novel >_<
Day 5 ^^
Gogo's day 5 is already available by the way
Oh Okay 😄
NSFW?
nope. Sorry, wrong game
The game is 100% sfw
Now we need NSFW patch 3:
Pervert
Bonsoir Ritch ! :)
Je veux juste vous dire que j'aime votre jeu, mais j'ai joue votre vieil version du jeu, cependant je vais jouer le nouvelle version (et pardonez-moi, je n'ai pas les accents sur mon clavier americaine >:( ). Aussi j'ai lu que vous avez un plus facile temps quand vous lisez en francais. Il est tres bon recontrer un francais encore ! Pendant que j'ecris cette, j'ai realise que VOUS etes dans le jeu tout le temps !! :0
ah merci ^^
Oui le français est ma langue maternelle donc j'ai plus de facilité à écrire comme ça. Si tu veux parler plus amplement j'ai un serveur discord ^^
Super ! :) J’ai juste le joigné. Mais I’ll eat possible qu’il soit le nuit quand je suis sur ligne. J’habites à Hawaï
hey, i noticed while playing that multiple files were missing,
most notably; all of the guard images, and some of the killool emotions
i have already tried redownloading, but it didnt work.
ah!! Thanks for telling me!
there might also be other files missing, but i havent found any so far.
This is an awesome game I even supported you on patreon I wish you re-open the production of it. you did such a good job. :n:
Daaaw thank you! ^^
will you be coming back to finish the game & re-open the patreon?
Of course I will finish the game, I never said I'll stop!
I don't know if I'll open a new patreon, but it is not in my plans for now
Hi, I can't download the game because my computer keeps saying "Your wifi isn't private, and I've set it to Private. It still won't work. I've even tried restarting. What should I do?
Uh? That's weird oô
Hmmm i don't know, try another browser? Firefox, google chrom, microsoft edge, etc
Sorry but would it be possible for this game to be made for android as well?
next update will yes! ^^
Thank you ^^
Really really good game.. I love the story, unlike any others. Hope when the story grows there's still a lot of options, it gets boring when you don't get to interact and it doesn't feel like you are playing or have any choice in anything that's going on.
You should make a Discord server for the game!! (It would make thing a lot easier)
Yeah I definitely will!
is this yaoi? I'm looking for some f/m furry but can't find any :'(
your char is genderless, so you decide if they're male or female =)
Thank you ! :D
No problem! I thought about it, that most furry VNs are featuring homosexual relationships. So with a genderless char, you can decide if it's yaoi or not!
yeah, I don't have problem with being yaoi as I can still read as more gender neutral most of time, but when it's NSFW it kind breaks the immersion for me when we get description of things that I don't how it is, like a choice of how to deal with a boner and some other intimate choices that it's not intuitive for females. I end up seeing my character more of a NPC than my mc.
I know right. It annoys me a lot when a VN's story is nice and immersive, then suddenly sex time. There's this one VN that I like very much, and suddenly bam 15 minutes of sex
I have a question, is the game in another language, like Spanish?
Sadly no but I'll do a french version and maybe a german version too
i am absolutely in love with this game! the characters are super lovable too. killool and ritch are my favorites so far. looking forward to this games development!! c:
Thank you :D
yo i just checked my email and i saw that there is so many updates xD, ill download it and play it later, promise
Lol thats cool take your time x3
Very creative game!
Thanks!
You might want to ask a friend to proofread some of your dialogue, most of it is alright, but some of it feels rather forced, or unclear. However, the art style and idea is quite good! I hope you move forward with this project!
What do you mean unclear and forced?
"Prepare a meal" is a bit formal, "did you cook something?" or "did you make some grub?" would feel a bit more natural, for example.
"Rodents and Rabbits were in huge misunderstandings with Foxes" is also a bit odd grammatically, "Rodents and Rabbits had big misunderstandings about Foxes" reads a bit better.
But I get the idea of the story pretty well, and the characters are pretty interesting! I hope we get to see more of them!
oh yeah thanks for the advices! As myself and the one that helps me for the grammar aren't native english speakers it's something that can happen sadly
And thanks ^^ next update will, if everything goes well, be tomorrow!
the cousins character didnt load
Ah! Thanks for telling me!
no problem have a good day
Okay my timing couldn't have been worse downloaded this at 10ish 6 hours later I got back online after finishing my first run(on like 3 games including this one) and found out there was an update 2 hours after my download but either way I certainly am loving it so far
Haha oh no! But don't worry I didn't add much story to the update, mostly fixed bugs
And thanks ^^
Spelling and grammar errors in the first 5 minutes of the game. Look for these texts:
"Ritch takes care of me, I should ao least be frank." ao --> at
"I... Followed you." --> I... followed you.
Is there a more convenient way for you to report these errors?
Edit: Actually, upon playing more of the game there's a lot of grammar problems. I would recommend a way to easily report these errors to you besides in a comment.
Ah! Thanks for the reports. These were errors that got through my supervision.
I'll try to figure out a way to easy the process 🤔
Thank you for your excellent work!
Greetings from Russia!
Thanks! Greetings from Canada, another cold country ^^
I got an error after Misuke said: "What do we have here?
"
ah thanks! I'll fix it. In the meantime you can press ignore
I got this error during Killool and Shiro moment at the beach.
Someone already told me but I just cannot find what the error is :S
Are you playing on Linux?
PC version on my android phone with the Joiplay app.
Just Monika, Just Monika
Damn DDLC Reference
I like it. But when I play it on ren'py it was so glitchy when the character shifts emotions and when I press the menu button.
What do you mean glitchy?
I am on android and I use the Joiplay app to play the PC version and when the characters change expressions and poses the screen blacks out for a bit.
Weird
its going so well im enjoying it so far
thank you! ^^
This will be one of the games I'd look forward to playing! Already attached to Killol and Shiro! Alongside Gogo too(he reminds me of myself tbh).
Ritch is basically a friend I can spend time with, but not romantically. But I do like him!
I'm glad you enjoyed them! ^^
The storyline is greattt can't wait for the next update, and heyy, if you need for some programming helps i can help yaa, like ready for android build or some improve coding ha ha , i am programmer btw.
And also the game file is unusually large for short story . I notice there is some file that is large and maybe not necessary for the game. I encourage you to remove it's for now it's take time to download with my mobile internet speed.
Either way, can't wait for the next update
Thanks for the advice! I'll look what can make it this heavy. Hmm a little help could be nice!
Would you ever plan on making a Discord server? Specifically for reporting bugs and writing errors. Asking because I usually help up-and-coming games with that sort of thing.
nice work though ... there is some inconsistencies with the story like how he is upset for me follow him one day and then like completely forgets about it the next day but eh that is understandable to some degree.
i just figured there might be some problems with me sitting with a person i was just previously spying on XD .
Well he might do as if nothing happened too =P
on shiro's route .
"Alright, will be here around 9 then."
"here" would refer to the beach but from what i gathered from the earlier in the conversation you actually mean to refer to his house so it would be "there".
Thanks for the advise!
its good me love it *caveman noises*
x3
after two finishes I can say that I haven't played a better novel yet. the characters are original and very interesting in terms of personality and their story, the style in which they are drawn make their feelings stronger (and make them cutest). the world is briefly explained so that I can focus on the plot. I also like the dialog options for which I really feel that they can change something.
The only problem is that I found the game by accident. maybe show it on more places will help find it more easily. (=
I would like to appeal to the creator not to hurry with the development, I would love to wait. (=(=(=
Daaaw thank you so much! ^//^
any ideas on how I could show off my game more?
simply wherever it can be shown (=
such as furaffinity.net, deviant art and other networks
and there giving screanshots of the game so people can know what is it and how beautiful it looks.
the reason why the game fascinated me was the style of the characters, so I would use it as a banner.
I hope,I helped you at least little. (=
if you want to ask on something else, I will be happy to answer. (=
I like that every character has its own unique personality, I really enjoyed it! I absolutely love the art style, its adorable and clean, it just needs coloring. Can't wait for new updates!Keep it up! ^w^
thanks ^^
I quite enjoyed what you have so far, I followed you on twitter and shared about this game so more people can know about it, You have done an awesome job so far, I look forward to seeing more from you. Have a great day (or night) and stay awesome.
Aww thanks! ^^ glad you enjoyed it!
Of course, and if there is ever anything else I can do to help, just let me know and I will do what I can.
Well if you wanna chat a bit, you can contact me on Twitter ^^
Alright, also, sorry for the extremely late reply.
@ritchlombaroo
I'm looking forward to update 1.2!!!
Omg Ritch is so cute!!! 😊 I hope you keep updating this VN and also Ritch route uwu. It's also playable on Android using JoiPlay app, for those asking for Android version 😉
Oh really? Thanks for the advise!
And glad that you like him hehe ^^
I'm trying hard I promise :(
can always play on pc
yup!